Nice

Some nice lyrics, they come out pretty good, this is good and same ol stuff we always hear the real stuff is being able to make it real with out the same ol same, but regardless this was actually no too bad, could have more backround sounds that blend well with the vocals.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more backround sounds to blend with.

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Great!

Good enough to be on radio, hehe, glad you're still here on NG though, not much quality hiphop around here. Nice beat, nice lyrics. keep up the good work!

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