Signifigant

Pretty good and well made for your first use of the vocals a nice piece the start though is a bit repetitive but this is just a personal opinion try taking away a few loops and listen to it otherwise good song nice script for the vocals maybe in fact try taking away 30: to 1:30 of the start and see how it sounds.

Changes

this is very good however i would cut the start untill there is about 10 - 20 seconds before the vocals kick in from the start ;)

apart from that this is really good

Good Job ;)

nice

i like the vocals the beat really makes them sound more important. where did you get the influence for this?

not too bad

try having some better drum samples and try working on your bass too.. and the song would be way better if it had the kick-bass melo.. i like the pad tho

cool

it goes all over the old song though lol