Here's what I think...
- You don't deserve that rating, IMO. (Come on... 2.27 from 10 votes?)
- Overall sound is on the thin side. Try boosting your low end, maybe 2-3dB up the 100 to 300Hz mark to give it some punching power. I'm already listening to your track using Sennheisers (that has good low-end delivery), and it still felt thin. Listen to this on thinner speakers, and the track's energy dies.
- You played with panning a lot. Nice. Kept the track interesting.
- Intro was okay... but made me initially think that there's something wrong with the file.
Hope you can fix this, because it's good. 4/5 and 8/10 for now. Hope this helps. ^_^
Pass by my page if you have time. ;-)
jnry3