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This is the first song I've finished and am happy with. I'd love to hear what you guys think and any feedback would be very appreciated

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It's a very cute song! It has a nice and happy feel to it. I really like the bass drop you did at 00:51; however, I do have a couple of things I want to mention. The chords you use in this piece feels a little messy and change too much. Perhaps if you were to tone the chord changes down a little then it would sound much cleaner. I like how you have separate sections in the music. It really helps to tell a story. I have to admit, the sudden change at 02:26, was a little sudden. I would recommend cleaning it up a little bit and giving it a better transition. Throughout the song, I could hear a couple of places when notes clash. A good rule of thumb is to avoid excessive use of 2nd intervals (What I mean by this is playing an A and a B then a G and an F right after each other). The big takeaway from this comment is to refine your transition and chords. Otherwise, I really enjoyed the song. It has a nice cute melody which I like. Well done!

SoloSurvivor332 responds:

Thanks a lot! Rlly appreciate the feedback :)

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57
Score
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Uploaded
Nov 27, 2021
9:45 AM EST
Genre
Dubstep
File Info
Song
3.1 MB
2 min 56 sec

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