you have bars, you just can't perform it

hmmm

You can write a rap.. pretty good too but personally it sounds like you are trying to force it out. you need to work on your rythem a little bit but other than that it is pretty good

wow

my fam's like that 2.

Yoink, I love you

haha, yes, I love you, but not in the gay guy way...

I favorited you as an artist because you were funny, but this is actually a good song. Unlike psychogoldfish is a loser and all those, I love those, but this could actually be called good by real people, even thouhg I loved the psychogoldfish rap

thank you for creating music lol

good

it's good, the music and all is alright but add lyrics.

:)