THIS SUCKS just kidding

I disagree with author comments. :P
Just kidding this was good I personally hate rap and I too is a rock fan but this was pretty cool (all your stuff owns man! really!

Haha

Great stuff, beat kind of like Reggeton, anyhow, great progressive music. Everything is clear and heavy. Great. Keep it going!

-cd-

better then something i did in the past!

My attempt at hip hop came out something sounding a little country! LOL but i got it.. I think you did a good job with this! You may wanna losen the beat up.. slow it down here and there.. The instruments you chose work out well.. You did a pretty good job on this.

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yeah this song need to loosen up a bit. The midi drums are a but too ridged. You know.... Most music production software allows you to de-quantize your MIDI notes or what they sometimes call "Humanize." Funny how you use a computer to make something sound more natural. :-P

This is not a bad song by any means at all. Like I said before, you need to add some more dynamic into your drums. they sound like they are mostly all at the same velocity which is something you can go in and change easily.

I wouldnt quite call this a hip hop beat....

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Well, if you want to make music, you've got to 'feel' the music you're making. Most people make music because they enjoy it (at least I do). You can't make music until you 'get into' the song you're making.,,

I hope that helped some.

This song is pretty chill. Something are a little off, but its still pretty good!
Keep up the good work.
-TMM43
PS: Check out my latest song "Weekend Has Come"