You should have told me

this is much better then what id expect, like for cereal i enjoyed this.

I hope Japanese air starts to kill you and you come back.

Nice

Reviewing while listening, I think that you made the just drum intro way too long, you could have used a better snare sound. The strings sort of hackle, it's just way too simple and repititive, because it's very long. A short song with lots of variety is better than a long song with less variety. Good job though.
Please listen to one of my songs.