Какие 6/10, какие 7/10?! Вы что с ума сошли?! 10/10, 5 звёздочек из 5 возможных! Безоговорочно!
P.S. Да, я русский!

Great but in some moments there are things that not in temper of the song

Мелодия в начале приятная. И вообще за начало лайк. Потом в 00;49 начинается некое месиво, которое я даже не знаю как прокомментировать. Потом тихий лид и опять в очередной редкий раз резкий переход. Ну сколько можно!? И потом в конце очередной капец. Почему капец!? Потому что у него абсолютно другое настроение, никак не связанное с основной мелодией. Ну хоть конец адекватный, просто обычная автоматизация. Короче, 7/10

Same problems, but better structure and mixing.
Because the problems remained, but some of them became less annoying.

Nice!

I think the confusing part for me in this song is probably the drum pattern that is added to this song. Also I'm kinda not a fan of that riser before the drop but obviously I will give that a pass.

The grand piano kinda has no mix to it. Maybe with EQ and reverb and probably compression might work, and the volume is not really adjusted right and seems a little bit off sync.

The beginning actually isn't that bad for me. And the lead is actually pretty cool despite the fact that it probably also need mixing.

I'm actually not the best producer for mixing and mastering either so I can't go to hard for the mix even if I was better.

The rest of this song is pretty good. Good Job! :)