ehhh, almost bleeding alittle

this one also has a lot of problems. the instruments don't flow like ilovejesus666 said your base instruments interfere.

speakers may not be the problem

Your bass guitar and your kick drum are interfering almost every time that they interact. The bass guitar is way too loud in the bass range, and the kick is right there with it. Also consider humanizing the high hats a bit, its very rare that you will see a human drummer playing hats like this. Also get your snare attack up!