Fail...

After having my previous review deleted from you snitching, I figured that I might as well leave criticism...

First off, you have nothing BUT flow on this track. You only rhymed 3 bars, everything else is just talking and/or repeating the same lines. The beat could be fixed some, feels like the snare is too technoish for the sorta strings. Sorta odd, cuz my cousin Moon sampled the same string, and made the beat waaaaaaaay iller. I got it on my computer if you'd ever like to hear it. But getting back to the point, your voice clips too much, and you lack equalizing. At parts you forced words in, making the flow a bit sloppy, but you came back with it while rappi- er... wait, I mean talking.

And just so you won't have to mark this as abuse again, I didn't insult, cuss, or say anything to offend. I left constructive criticism. Take it, and grow from it bruh.

yea

we need more artistss hre. this old war is soo booring. they like drop a beat after erry week while u drop 3 songs erry day. but somehow they keep talkin more shit lol.
anyway merry christmas lej

w00t

like KingNaNU said, your raping skills are off the chain. LOL, how did you get to be such a good rapist?? but seriously, not bad. kinda short for my liking but i 5'd it anyway.

not bad and

me too. once i get a comp hopefully i could start postin ish up on here.

lmfao, man an u got 'em

U got those 0's man, lmfao. Yo good shit, this def on o ya best. Anyways yo 2.54 / 5.00 (+ 0.21)
Keep it pimpin'
BN out