Hello there, back again...

I am now working on a song, titled "Just Go!".
I've decided to show a brief about it, and ask for your opinion...
I might not continue this, if it's disliked.

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Have you ever been in a situation, when you thought everything is fine,
that the person you love, loves you too?
That the person is honest with you, and that that person would
do anything for you?

And did it happen, that you was wrong?
That all that were lies?

Well, this is the moment I'm trying to capture with this song...
Read the short story under... the rain has it's great meaning,
and the melody emit the falling of the rain.

"It was a rainy afternoon, and he was standing in the rain, outside...
She came to him, looking at the young man with a confused look.
The girl wanted to say something, but he didn't let her...
- Just Go! - he said, as he pointed aside, as pearls made their way down his face.
The raindrops slowly fell besides, hitting the ground, and the boy was again
alone... alone and sad."