Notbad

Have to say this had a nice sound and plays off of that so you did have something here would have loved to see if you expanded on it

~X~

Great!

Thus the name? Haha, sounds great though, very funky indeed. Great beat, great sound effects and a nice progressive additions all through the track, keep up the good work!

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Realy good

The bass line was kicking, Diffrent. and fun. this song was all over the place! it was fun made me Dance ( im my chair) and yeah i did the same thing made a song whill drunk but my sucks...

ok ill write on this one

So since this is a pretty complicated piece Ill break it down, first the things that could be improved on.

First off, the filtered funk guitar sound throughout the whole song is just too loud, it takes away from the style of the piece, its not good as a lead instrument, and for a bg instrument its too loud. When the bass comes in, both being pretty loud it turns pretty inaudible, if anything heres where the guitar should be a little more silent. Also, the guitar dies out immediately, and being so loud its very abrupt/akward. The Rhodes playing is great! This is an example of a mis-balanced piece in the song. The rhodes should be louder than the bass here, as its the most important thing going on in the piece (the higher part) the new funk guitar that was introduced was great, shoula've kept that going the whole way through. The bass was very nicely done though, with the exception of the balance issue, everything came together pretty nicely, intro is very nicely done... for a bit then completely cuts off, as if it were rushed, I think the transition could use a little work. On the good stuff, the drums are excellently done, as is the bass. Sounds very Daft Punk (one of my favorite artists), its a good enough lenght, loved the jazz integration in there with the rhodes, good use of synth fx throughout the whole song, good timing, pleasing song to hear.

So again, my suggestions: Balance the guitar in the beginning, or bring it down a bit on volume once the bass enters, once the Rhodes comes in, bring the bass down and the Rhodes up, bring the overall bass sound a little down for distortion purpouses.

Overall, great job! the only problems were of balance, the actual song is very nicely done!

8-4 here

Originality=Greatness

its got that strange sound to it but i've heard strange stuff and gotten to enjoy it.. Hell some of MY stuff can be mighty strange.. Good work on this! I'm liking it. Keep on it !