You absolutely need to get better sounding string instruments, what you used kinda ruined the experience for me a bit :/

I do see the potential in the composition though, though imo it sounds somewhat empty in the parts without percussion (I'm not really one to talk though considering my entry xd)

Regardless, if you spent more time on this, I have no doubt it would be an absolute masterpiece >:)
Good luck on the contest, and I look forward to hearing your future stuff! Just followed ya :D