Not bad! I feel like it needs a little bit more variation in texture - a lot of times, the instruments are all playing the same thing. More variation in the background would probably make it feel less repetitive. The mixing also keeps the voice line from being heard properly, so I couldn’t really tell what it said. Certainly has a good choice of instruments and other sounds, though!

This is actually really good! Keep it up

Banging track , with clear progression and sounds.