Wow
I heard this song on a game I was fooling around with; the first song in the game I heard besides the title song.
This song is pure pop. You're very talented.
And I read on another review, there's a newer version of the song??
I write my own stuff but rarely post it on here just because I don't post much at all. But I made this version of something I wrote a while back because I got a new condenser microphone and I wanted to try it out on something. So in other words, this is not a super edited piece of work, it was recorded in one take and what you hear is unedited except for reverb for effect.
Lyrics-
How was there a way?
How was I to blame?
Even under your clever disguise,
We were never the same.
There's not much to think about.
But you think that I still love you.
I've been hurt by you too many times to count,
So don't think that I still love you.
How was there a way?
How was I to blame?
Even under your clever disguise,
We were never the same.
I'm sorry to say that it's the truth
There's nothing more that you can do.
Your hazel eyes were turning blue
As you realized that we were through.
How was there a way?
How was I to blame?
Even under your clever disguise,
We were never the same.
I was there to stay
I wouldn't have thrown it away
Even if I'd never opened my eyes,
We couldn't have stayed that way.
How was there a way?
How was I to blame?
Even though you knew how to play,
You lost at your very own game.
Wow
I heard this song on a game I was fooling around with; the first song in the game I heard besides the title song.
This song is pure pop. You're very talented.
And I read on another review, there's a newer version of the song??
Thank you. The newer version is much better. :P It can be found by looking at my collection and finding the one that was submitted in '09 (I think? lol)
That's hell good!!
Brilliant song. At some parts the vocals were too quiet or loud.
If there are any effects on the vocals then it'd be better without them.
Your singing awesome though but the lyrics could be worked on a bit more.
You should get rid of the 'very' in the last line.
The instruments were heaps good but the 'tink' noise got a bit annoying once you noticed it.
Thanks, this was actually more of a test of my new mic at the time so many of the problems weren't sweated because of its unofficial-ness. lol The newer version is quite a bit different than this one.
Epic
Epic! Epic! Epic!
Everyone better vote 5's and review 10's!
Keep it up!
Omni-Kron
Yes they'd better!!
Thanks for commanding them. haha XD
I love you.
Your love songs are pretty darn brilliant. They're raw and open, when I write I hide it all with an extended metaphor, which makes for shyte lyrics. I could wish for nothing more than for you to get your songs produced as best as they can.
Most of my lyrics are something I thought up and aren't really specifically something that happened to me, but these lyrics actually came right out of a page of a notebook that I vented in about a year before this song was put together. I too really hope that I can reproduce these songs much better someday. The main obstacle right now is jsut the time to do it, I'm sure I could get it all done well if I had the time.
wow man just wow
you have an amazing voice and your music is good too, I just heard your Suteki Da Ne song and you went into my favorite artists, I remember people were saying how the NG Audio is dying, having folks like you keep it alive, make an album, become famous and share your music with the world. Great job man
Thanks for faving me!! :D I will definitely continue to share my music with as many people as I can thanks to comments like yours. And hopefully and album soon too. lol
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.