OMG 3rd song I wanna add to my anime from you!!!!!! Ur just so good!

I really like the emotional appeal of the beginning melodies and the sound design. The plucked strings are a particularly nice touch, and the brief dissonance at :47 serves as a great transition into the section with the swelling string chords. The melodies at 1:15 felt like a true moment of triumph - like a kid recovering from cancer is performing in a ballet recital. If I had to complain about one thing here, it might be that the ending came on a bit suddenly. But otherwise, the sound design, production quality, composition, and atmosphere are all top-notch here. By all means, keep it up, A145! ^_^

Mixing, mastering, and balance
2/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
1.25/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
2/2
Instrumentation and sound design
1/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1.5/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
1/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
1/1
Composite score
9.75/10

Your piano is mixed quite nicely. The hammers quite audible.

I would like a bit less low mid on your high strings, a bit more in the airy string rasp range, and perhaps some less abrupt note transients as they come in. Ah, attacks, that's the word I was looking for. On fuller sections, that high rasp could come off some to focus on your mallets, as they are coming in with a very twah twah attack on top of them (adjusting timing early in post helps this). So in short, some EQ shifts as things move along, and a bit of attention to detail on those attacks, ensuring they link up with the mallets or any other lead material.

Still you have some sections like right before your end in which they come in beautifully.

Otherwise, you've done a swell job and crafted a nice score. Great work! Thanks for coming out to NGADM!

A Masterpiece.
Ruben, FD Master

I love this... Relaxing song