this is a pretty standard indie song at least at first, but I promise you that doesn't have to be a bad thing! You have a lot of charm to your style!
especially where you gave it your own special flair, like I really enjoy the swanky guitar/bass(?) that kicks in with the strumming!
and the fact you don't have lyrics for the "everythin's a mountain, get that through your head" is strangely refreshing to me, kinda because you have to listen to hear it for yourself?
honestly the longer one listens to this the better it gets, like that electric guitar that comes in around the last quarter of the song? MM.👌

You have a talent, my friend! Forgive my clumsy critique, but your lyrics are relatable and your style is fun❤️
keep up that good shit

edit: 2023 and I'm still listening to this and getting it stuck in my head dude, I'm pretty sure that means you did something right