Hey the acting on this is pretty damn solid! Work those production skills a little - the overall volume of the track is very low, creating a number of other challenges - and you'll be making amazing stuff.
O’ Tarnished, halt. Have a seat.
Do you know what lies beyond this road? All that have tread it know, but they unlike I couldn’t find the words to describe it. At least before the abomination swallowed them whole that is, bones n’ all.
Yes… Warn you, I will, of the ungodly sight of puss dipped sagging flesh and bags full of gnashing teeth that all appear to be haphazardly sewn onto the blubber endowed creation of a heathen’s baby that lies ahead.
Oh… It’s origins? None know, but those whom survived speculate it to have rolled down from the mountains of Volcano Manor, a gluttonous heretic once tarnished cursed with such greed that he saw fit to defile his very being in order to make the process of consumption less taxing on his already deteriorating vessel.
Luck, I wish you; for it is rumored that the tarnished beings digested in the stomach of this foul creature nay find themselves awakening at the foot of the Erdtree, but melded to the carcass that is the beast itself.
Hey the acting on this is pretty damn solid! Work those production skills a little - the overall volume of the track is very low, creating a number of other challenges - and you'll be making amazing stuff.
Noted my man, thank you for the feedback! Genuinely appreciate it! I think I still have the project file saved so I can actually fix it this time.
Accent on point! Breathed with care.
TEN OUT OF TEN CHEESE WHEELS
The mixing is amazing, audio editing done very well. The gruffiness in the voice sounds a tiny bit forced from the back of the throat like you're choking. The accent is great and you portray this character well. This is just a personal opinion but I find that gruffiness sounds better straight from the bottom of your throat down from the diaphragm. Either than that it's awesome.
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