Reminds me of an old Fall Of Troy sound and mix down, takes me back in time for certain. I think I'm noticing a few small things with the mix. Over compression: you got a relatively small brick. Also the bass tones go from almost overpowering to almost underwhelming at 1:47. Massive bass nerf @ 1:46, getting the compression tools mastered and maxing out the field would totes give you the extra space for everything in this very powerful jam. Finding the deepest corners of your sound spectrum can be a harrowing journey, I wish you the best!

Then there seems to be a ton of guitar buzz, most noticeable at 00:44. I ran into a similar issue with my mixing board, had an active channel doing nothing but putting the fuzzies on my headphones. Gotta find that buzz and CUT IT'S BALLS OFF- I mean mitigate the buzzing. Sorry, that escalated very quickly. I was just trying to be funny and helpful but managed to get really weird really fast. If you do want your guitar to keep it's balls then that's on you but they really don't help at all and can lead to stray guitars running wild in the neighborhood. No bueno D: