I like the dreamy atmosphere at the beginning and the gradual fade-in. The crisp beats and airy vocals at :30 are great, and I’m loving the relaxed and upbeat mood. The progression is a bit slow-paced at times, and I would’ve liked it to have a bigger “moment of arrival” at some point - climactic, melodious, etc. That said, I liked the breakdown with the piano riff. I’ll also add that the production here is rock-solid, with some very clear and well-balanced instruments throughout. Some more variety towards the end of the piece would’ve been welcome, as again, I feel like it’s missing something to hit it home and add an overarching sense of dynamism. Still, you’re clearly a talented producer with a knack for soothing atmospheres and neat vocal work. Keep at it, GalaxyTones! ^_^
Mixing, mastering, and balance
2/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
1/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
1.5/2
Instrumentation and sound design
1/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1.25/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.75/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
.5/1
Composite score
8/10