Sounds like a nice song, could use better mixing
I like the general grooviness of this piece, and vocals seem pretty nice, but it was hard to make them out in the mix. You probably should turn down the bass and the electric guitar chords down some more so that they don't obscure the vocals - though they do sound like good levels for an instrumental. The climax near the end was pretty cool )though sounded fairly clipped), and I wished it'd had gone into a new section to extend the song. But what you have here is pretty good. Just need to watch the levels some more in the future.