respectful arent you

its good to see someone respect his loved ones with music
anyway how did you make this? i wanna know the program you used :D

well

Nice - evokes feeling um the drums I couldn't hear all that well but pretty good overall

Really?

I made a song once to because my freind died... lol. Well, good job, very simple choords, yet great sounding instruments. The Pad was a little dull, but it was cool. I liked how you included bass in the background. Nice.

Keep it up!

Meow.

haha, I love that garage band pad. I used it once in an old song. Glad to hear someone actually using garage band to record. Gah, this reminds me of a lot of my old stuff I removed a little while back.

Beautiful piano, nice use of the strings, I love the melodies. Really, this is a nice piece of work you have.

While I didn't necisarily notice the flaws, I did think that some of this was a bit minimal. You can always go back and edit your melodies using the midi creator thingy. With that in mind, I'm a little curious why you didn't go back and add to the drums. This could have benifited from a hi hat rhythm, and a more complex rhythm in general. While one could argue against complexity, I'd say that a rhythm that accents the sounds around it is much better than a rhythm that just accents itself.

I love hearing people use garage band correctly. Rock on.

Grand parents dying is bad.

Mine died while I was about 12, saddening. It is good to see you wanted to make this to respect them, it is a nice and gentle song, I like it a lot.
Keep up the good work.