Yo, always ignore the negative reviews. Part of getting somewhere as a producer. You'll never start off as a pro, especially when making hard genres like this.

There's a lot off key in the track, gotta pay attention to that. Might wanna invest in some sweeps and sounds to make transitions smoother. The volume is better from the last time i listened to your work. Still repetitive too.

Best of luck :)

Where did the negative reviews come from? I personally really liked this track.