Damn

Wow, good thing I came across this man. I'm a big fan of this beat and it's pretty good with these vocals too. But I got some suggestions to make.

Good Things:
-Great concept in general, I loved the idea of this song and it sounded really epic. More people should rap to songs like this.
-Great lyrics and rapping.

Bad Things:
-No offense, but the female vocals were kind of sub-par. They sounded off-key at times and sometimes faded out too soon.
-Some of the voice acting was kind of bad/cheesy. But eh, it fits the song. ;)
- A bit on the short side but it's fine.
-I feel like the talking sections of this song were kind of long. But I still love the message it's conveying.

Again, really good job man. I personally think you should really remake this song with better vocals and a bit longer. If you I did that I honestly believe it would become a hit. But whatever, 5/5, peace.

Emotional but vocal work could've been much better

Seriously why do you have the vocals sound so ....distorted?

The concept, idea, and everything is fucking awesome!

Just work on the vocals!

been a while...

since i been here. good stuff. i especially like the chorus, its catchy.

This track is pretty cool with the lyrics

Yeah, it's pretty cool with lyrics but It sounds better without like in Zajeds version, anyway, it's allways cool to listen to your tracks.

Epic

As always, the mastering is great. Props to all three of you on this one. Great pacing, instrument choices, the chorus builds up the mix great, drums perfect. Keep up the good work. Fave'd.

Peace