lol
Best I've heard from you so far !!! I think you been hanging out with lej too long shit start's to rub off you know !!! Keep it up you'll keep getting better !!!
Author Comments
Speak up boy, all I gots to say
Broken-Needle responds:
hah word, thanks man
more flow boy, i cant hear u
ur lyrics ar'nt great, but u could save them if u had more
flow, or energy. u sound bored or tired when u rap
try and make it a little more exciting, and u could pass this off as having good lyrics.
twoshek-
Broken-Needle responds:
lmfao, aight glad you realize how terrible ma' lyrics are, cuz anybody cud write better shit than that. The bored thing is on purpose, cuz this shit's boring 2 me.
good shit
GOOD SHIT STEPPING IT UP, keep up ya flow n shit n good lyricz ,
peace, SeRAPhic
Broken-Needle responds:
yessir
yeayea
ur flow is slightly better, but u still need quite a bit of work. u kno, talkin and rappin are very different. i kno u'll b able to perfect it with hard work. jus keep it up man! work at it n u'll get it! keep it real man, peace~
Broken-Needle responds:
ye I'ma get there no worries
what!
pretty good rappin that scooby doo part is tight, the onlything is the hook kinda wack pretty good though
Broken-Needle responds:
hah glad you liked it, the hook simply to get the message thru, no need 2 put time into anything when you ain't dealin wit fake foo's. Appreciate the suppot tho man
Credits & Info
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3.08 / 5.00
- Uploaded
- Jan 28, 2008
- 4:21 PM EST
- Genre
- Hip Hop - Modern
- File Info
- Song
- 2.3 MB
- 2 min 33 sec
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