Pretty good, just wished it was longer
Author Comments
**song file updated 4/24**
oh, for you to only be a faint memory.
produced (partially), mixed, and engineered by me
lyrics:
i feel like fading
this life just isn't mine
i've lost touch too many times
all these thoughts stuck in my mind
i have trouble facing
your touch was so divine
now my heart is intertwined
with all the pain you left behind
and now i'm stuck behind a wall
that i'll be never able to break down
'cause the strength i had is gone
i guess that's what i get for not keeping you around
i feel like fading
this life just isn't mine
i've lost touch too many times
all these thoughts stuck in my mind
i have trouble facing
your touch was so divine
now my heart is intertwined
with all the pain you left behind
This is quality. Your vocal mix in particular. I would mix the drums differently and perhaps choose different samples/kits. They are sitting back really far in the mix. Sidechaining kick and snare, widening cymbals may help
But otherwise great work!
deadman responds:
thank u for the feedback! :3
this is great!
I wish the song was longer... I love it keep up the work!
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