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this is a prototype the real ones not out yet

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DJStain

2004-07-28 18:17:50

Improving...

Ok, for one... your bass distorts the track. Try feeling around a bit and put in a comporessor onto your main fx. Fill in the empty area and make it less repetitive by adding a reverb to send 1 then send the appropriate tracks. Try mixing the song up a bit and make it less repetitive. You will be surprised what a low string will do in the background ;). Also try screwing with presets a bit, see what you can create. Remember, no one wants to hear whats been done before. Keep it up.

darkaid responds:

thanks for the advice i can take constructive criticism and turn it into something great anyways coming from a dj that mean sumthin so iight then get back at me if u have anymore advice because i can seem to work on a lot of programs but fruity loops seems to be kinda hard to work with ~1 out