I like the frantic piano riff at the beginning and the crisp drums. I might’ve liked to hear a more proper introduction that didn’t throw the listener right into the middle of the action, though. The arrangement also feels a bit formulaic, with a fairly repetitive series of riffs, and then a major shake-up to the texture every 30 seconds or so. I also would’ve liked to see you scale back the energy at some point, just to create some more variety in the texture. The production quality is probably my favorite aspect of the piece, with loud, clear, and well-balanced frequencies throughout. The rhythmic work with the drums is also really nice. I appreciate the added layer of synths at 2:58, which made the piece feel more dynamic and conclusive than it otherwise would have. Still, a bit more ebb and flow in the composition would be welcome, especially in the midst of phrases. Overall, you’ve made a punchy, catchy, and energetic track with some cool sound design and a full, rich texture. Keep at it, DWAAAN! :)
Mixing, mastering, and balance
1.75/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
.75/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
1.5/2
Instrumentation and sound design
.75/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1.25/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.5/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
.75/1
Composite score
7.25/10