My gosh! What a beautiful piece of music! It is as if I am watching a night sky and beholding the nature of the cosmos as they form into their very own starry go-round.

I have listened to this track in several different pitches and have felt enchanted by it everytime; one could even say starstruck.

Keep up the magic~

Well I asked if you wanted honest feedback, so here you are. There are some promising things here. The part at 1:08 is an interesting hook. It feels mystical and whimsical. The sounds chosen have a nice vibe and are evokative of the title. However, compared to the hook, the rest of the song feels weak. For example, the first verse starting at 0:28 is weak. The melody feels like a place-holder A stronger melody might be needed. I feel that the song is too long for what it is. The parts feel similar to each other. You could try to alleviate this by making the song more dynamic by adding and removing elements throughout the song. You already do this a bit with the piano alone, but more things like that can improve the song. I like the reverse at the very end. I think that, and the hook I mentioned earlier feel inspired. I hope you are encouraged by this to improve on your strengths and shore up weaknesses.