It Was...Interesting...
I'm assuming this wasn't meant to be a serious deathcore song. In which case it was actually quite amusing. If it was serious, you sir have some problems, though I tend to doubt it was serious.
Overall the song would've been better if it were better quality, it sounds a bit rough and static-ey. That and the screaming could've been a bit better. This had to be inhale. Inhale doesn't take a wicked long time to get down. If you practice more, or maybe just did a pig squeal the whole time, it would've come out better.