I like the dreamy sound design at the beginning. The chord progression is a bit cliche, and at :15 the piano and bell-like synth lines kinda trip over each other a bit. I like the crisp drums at :29 and the cutesy breakdown at :44, although the transition into :44 was a bit abrupt. The mix could be a tad sharper here, especially in some of the mid-range harmonies. Some more compression all around would probably be advisable, and during some of the more minimalistic sections (like 1:30), some more reverb might help fill out the atmosphere. During the busier sections (like at 2:13), some of the instruments are hard to hear, especially the string melodies. It might help to look into panning effects as a way of making all the harmonies sound more distinct.

That said, I like the emotional quality of the section at 1:44, as well as the added string harmonies at 2:00. Clearly, you have a good sense of harmony, rhythm, and instrumentation. The arrangement sounds a tad formulaic here - there are regular changes to the texture every 8 bars or so, but not a lot of ebb and flow within those 8 bars. Overall, the composition is strong here, though.

Overall, I love the tranquil mood and melodies in this piece. Crafting a “looser,” more dynamic arrangement and tightening up the production quality would help take it to the next level, but as it is it’s both catchy and relaxing. :) Keep at it, Qwerzer! ^_^

Mixing, mastering, and balance
1.25/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
1/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
1.75/2
Instrumentation and sound design
1/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.75/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
.5/1
Composite score
7.25/10

This was very nice! Nice work.

I can see how it's inspired by tboi music. I don't know if it's suited for background music in a game though, because it doesn't loop very well.

Anyway, I like the overall texture a lot. It's busy but not overwhelming and everything blends together pretty well.
During the sections with the drums it's missing a melody in my opinion. It has that synth and those bell-type sounds, both of which could work as a melody, but because it has both, neither of them really feel like they're the focus.
The transitions at 0:44 and 1:28 are a little too abrupt for my taste. Something smoother would work better, especially because the whole piece is so mellow.

Very good. I really enjoyed the lil intermission things. I don't know what to call em but you get me right. Plus, the song has a nice atmosphere in general; 'feels very magical.

Raelly cool, I will follow you, so i can see waht you creat next.