Get steppin' at that rap.
Instrumentals are great. I'm excited for the vox.
My girlfriend Anna broke up with me over a year ago, and though I was over it months ago, it still fucked me up for those months where I was just completely depressed and shit. I never got to say what I wanted to say, so why not make a written thing about it I first thought. Then I thought why not make it into a rap.
So I was like nice idea... and I ended up failing at writing the rap, so I just made the instrumental so far. =(
Update: Rap failed miserably since my mic sucks, so here's the rap that I wrote for it anyways.
yo
This right here is a rap
dedicated to a girl, my girl
who made me the happiest guy
and then the saddest guy
shit
Yo Anna, you know I loved you so
I could never ever have let you go
And I just thought I should letchu know
That one time you were my everything yo
I was the board and you were my tack
There wasn't anything you didn't lack
A great friend, and amazin in the sack
So why are we having this setback
You talking about breakin up with me
Telling me you don't have time for me
But I am your man, why can't you see
And tell me why we cannot just be
Shit, we went out for nearly a year
But all along I had this fear
That my heart you would just betray
Now I just gotta man up and say
[Goodbye Anna]
So long
[Goodbye Anna]
I'll be strong
[Goodbye Anna]
But I'll sing this song
[Goodbye Anna]
All year long
[Goodbye Anna]
Peace out
[Goodbye Anna]
I won't pout
[Goodbye Anna]
About how you pulled out
[Goodbye Anna]
And shut me out
I never hurt you, I treated you right
But I guess you just can't see the light
And right now things could be better
but you just fucked up my semester
Now I can't even concentrate
My heart I just cannot sedate
All I could ever see was your face
But now those memories I must erase
Your past boyfriends hurt you
But I cared for and loved you
I was your best friend and your boo
Don't say it's a lie, you know its true
You couldn't have asked for a better man
To make you happy, that was my plan
But now you just got up and ran
My dear dear sweet beautiful anne
[Goodbye Anna]
Fuck you
[Goodbye Anna]
I never ever hurt you
[Goodbye Anna]
So why'd you leave me like this
[Goodbye Anna]
Missing and longing your kiss
[Goodbye Anna]
Forget this
[Goodbye Anna]
You're dismissed
[Goodbye Anna]
You're off my list
[Goodbye Anna]
Anna the Princess
[Goodbye Anna]
Fuck off
[Goodbye Anna]
You wretched rip-off
[Goodbye Anna]
I gave you everything
[Goodbye Anna]
But now I'll sing
[Goodbye Anna]x4
Get steppin' at that rap.
Instrumentals are great. I'm excited for the vox.
its sad
the vocoder was harsh but the song was realy good. keep it up!
Yeah man. Maybe it'll be more muted when I rap to it. I dunno.
Thanks for the review :D
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.