I like the quirky atmosphere at the beginning. It’s a little hard to get a sense of the meter/rhythm at first with all the risers in the texture, but by 1:00 the texture is coming together well. The progression is a bit slow-paced, but the creative percussion and rhythmic content helps keep me engaged. I would’ve liked to see the harmonic framework have a bit more depth here, and throughout the piece it felt like it was missing a strong lead instrument. Maybe some vocals would fit the bill? The dreamy atmosphere and production quality are top-notch here, though. The compositional details just need a bit more fleshing out. Full credit for mixing and sound design, though. Keep at it, Jans! ^_^

Mixing, mastering, and balance
2/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
.75/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
1.5/2
Instrumentation and sound design
1/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1.5/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.75/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
.5/1
Composite score
8/10