I like the quirky texture at the beginning. At around :06, that one glitchy effect gets a bit harsh-sounding in the mix - I would dial back the distortion and filter out some of the treble-range frequencies, and then maybe give it some wet reverb or something so that it fades into the background a bit. It’s really hard to hear the drums or other elements of the sound design above that synth, and the entire texture sounds really grating and distorted here. The vocal samples are the main source of harmonic content, and there isn’t really that much variety or depth in the texture either. You’re clearly a talented producer with a knack for creative rhythms and horrorcore content, but the composition just needs a lot more fleshing out to satisfy most of my scoring rubric’s criteria here. Sorry! For what it’s worth, I think there’s a lot of potential here between the creepy vocals and the cool drum fills towards the end, and I hope you’ll keep working on this. Keep at it, Peshay! ^_^
Mixing, mastering, and balance
.5/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
.5/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
.25/2
Instrumentation and sound design
.25/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
.5/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.75/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
.25/1
Composite score
3/10
Peshay 
