Was not expecting that beat to come into play
I digged that shit.
Your melody and structure use is quite nice.
Must say Id give you 10/10 If you used them right
But you kind of took this track in a weird path and its quite not in the path of ambient or anything its more experimental then anything.
I do like most of the melody you wrote though its actually good just needs some work to justice the track.
Things Id do
-progress the track more
-Sidechain the kick&bass
-Loose some low freq on the percs and bass maybe around 200
-More reverb on them open hats and snare
-Lower the bpm a bit
8/10
4/5
Hope that helped