some really lovely cohesion here with the different sounds, it's all so sweet and lovely.

i feel like the first half could honestly maybe do to lean a bit more into a noise-scape sorta vibe, as it is clearly trying to be melodic, but the pace is so slow and drawn out that i found my attention waning a little,, (but it's a sleepytime jam so idk what i was expecting lol!)

when things start to pick up a bit more around the 1:50 mark, i am intrigued and very lulled by the pleasantness -- I find the pad coming in at 2:00 to be a little overpowering as it is immediately present. i like its inclusion in the piece, so maybe I'd just fade it in a bit more -- the little 3note repetition bell you have going is so gold though, it really ties everything else together in the 2nd half so well -- i honestly LOVE the second half,, i even wish it were longer -- its two minutes but it really feels like it flashes by, much like a good dream.

the end works -- though i really wish that bell crept through just a bit more closer to the end of the song.

i really enjoyed this thank you :D