This sounds really great, really, I enjoyed it, but it's just that the saxophone is too loud! You could have made it a bit quieter, but otherwise, you did a nice job.

Smooth...

That's really smooth man...
I really like it, the mood is right, and the instruments work very well together. I love the drums that kick in every now and then. ^^
Great job, you're obviously talented! :D

the sax...

it's a great loop, i guess it would mix well with the game, but the sax sounds noisy!

doesnt make me feel very watermellony

great but like you said you might want to clean it up a bit

like this

I like the looping. My sister plays this song in her band, and I think it's a good version. The sax is a bit too loud though