Nice but there's a few flaws. Mostly the bassline, it doesn't really feel like it's on the right key. It sounds like it's in an A key instead of a D which it was intended to be in.
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Lesgo artcore(dnb but 1700s)
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Okinasai responds:
You're right; the main reason for that was because I put 2 basslines together. The 1st is an offbeat bass that gets the notes from the chords and the 2nd one is sustained notes but I used a sequence sytrus bass, so it plays at intervals and maybe the instrument is not tuned??
I wanted the bass to be a bit dynamic but I didn't put much effort, thx for the critique btw.
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