beginning melody and part is not bad, transition is actually cool (honky tonk piano cool)
buildup is standard works well
drop has satissfying drumkit
1:19 i think sound effect is weird but 1:22 violin is cool as well as 1:30 organ (?) defo fav part of drop sound like ambience
1:49 eh weird melody some of the notes are off the scale ik it might be intensional but is still a bit off, cuz piano chords dont match up at all literally 0 universes those chords match buster
and U dont develop the melody u just fade it off cuz u know that its a lost cause dumbass
sry for that outburst anyway
2:03 transition is jarring idk how u wouldve made it better cuz ur weird melody kinda screwed u in terms of making transitions cuz it was hard to work with
2:21 this whole part i feel like theres way too little reverb compared to vocals it feels too like idk how to say it feels like im in a tiny room. its meant to feel atmospheric but it just doesnt
2:37 im not a fan of autotune or tuning vocals but thats just imo so i dont like this harmony of the sample
2:49 and look bro u said the vocals were too loud they were fine. these drums tho they are too loud!! and this is just opinion but i dont like short cut off flat sounding snare i liked the 1st drop snare more
ALSO bro u know how dubstep works when have u heard drums speed up that fast?! tf were u thinking ur meant to spend 4 bars on each 'speed' of drums but like sure
drop buildup end hold thing is cool--ish but again i think super a lot of reverb and some delay would make it work more as like a solo instrument playing some notes before drop
and the drop SFX pshhh thing needs like a intro woosh cuz it sounds too sudden trust me
3:04 but like overlooking all the issues (nerd) i had with the buildup this drop tho is like so fire the distortion and underwater feeling is sick.
3:06 this pshh thing again its too sharp and its not distorted and underwater feeling so it kinda makes it worse
also i like how it gets louder but 3:16 it gets a bit too loud buddy
and 3:19 most dissapointing moment of my life u were making it louder i thought u were leading in to drop part 2 but instead it just got quieter, mannnnnn i thought it would transition into developed, more house sounding drop using same SFX but a beat and it would be so cool omg im just sad thinking about what it couldve been
end is cool i guess i mean buildup endings are a bit not as cool but it works

so overall i actually like 1st part despite calling it npc house sry lol its actually cool and u cooked with the drop and the beginning of last drop is cool too. other parts need work and that one melody at 1:52 needs to be eradicated