The buildup took its time and never really paid off, but the melody was solid throughout. The drums keep it out of "dream" territory for me, but this audio could be paired with an animated story to produce something truly magical. Drums keep the pace brisk.

I think you did a great job at capturing the dreamy/ethereal feeling. The drums don't make it aggressive in my opinion, just more energetic and actiony. I like how for most of the song you play it on the same motif, but then change it up a bit towards the bridge part. Just great job in general, keep it coming!