Sounds great, but I do have a suggestion. Tone quality is an important part of how lyrics sound. Right now, I would describe your tone quality as very bright. If you make it darker by "muffling" consonants or by moving your vowels. Additionally, layering your voice with harmonies can help with that. However, I'm not a professional, so take my advice with a grain of salt.
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