I really like the lyrics you bring on this they are unique and love the slow play here too that music fits so well with this too, and you bring that out and make it that unique tune that I like nice job

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The vocals are off-key in parts and the drums crowd them out a lot but the guitar work is absolutely superb. You've evoked a feeling of a very sparse and intensely hot environment, and the other instruments feed into this mood very well without taking attention away from the guitar. Keep practicing on your vocals and you'll have a great addition to your lineup!

i may not listen to all that indie stuff frequently, but this is strangely soothing and somehow manages to calm me down. i might just be a weirdo.

You're really off-key in some parts I feel like, and the beginning deffinitely is a little slow, about 30 seconds in it gets kind of good, the drums are very nice, but like I said, at least in my opinion this would have fit better as an instrumental, but I'm just some random from the internet, maybe you like your voice and that's honestly fine. More power to you, just letting my opinion out