I really like the lyrics you bring on this they are unique and love the slow play here too that music fits so well with this too, and you bring that out and make it that unique tune that I like nice job
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Recorded in a bedroom with 1 guitar
As this year being my last year at this site, i shall leave with dignity! within the jamuary!!!
LYRICS
OUR PLAYGROUND RISE
Damn this days
Damn this place
This grey skies hurts my soul
Looks like we are inside a furnace
No control
No patrol
Our elementals
Rise their flags again
Our elementals
Rise their war again
Since nobody claimed the land
Scareev responds:
heya thankssssssssss :)))
The vocals are off-key in parts and the drums crowd them out a lot but the guitar work is absolutely superb. You've evoked a feeling of a very sparse and intensely hot environment, and the other instruments feed into this mood very well without taking attention away from the guitar. Keep practicing on your vocals and you'll have a great addition to your lineup!
Scareev responds:
i forgot to send a response, but thanks for the feedback! this track was kinda messy in the start since i just recorded everything one take xd, but i'm glad the guitar was good!
i may not listen to all that indie stuff frequently, but this is strangely soothing and somehow manages to calm me down. i might just be a weirdo.
You're really off-key in some parts I feel like, and the beginning deffinitely is a little slow, about 30 seconds in it gets kind of good, the drums are very nice, but like I said, at least in my opinion this would have fit better as an instrumental, but I'm just some random from the internet, maybe you like your voice and that's honestly fine. More power to you, just letting my opinion out
Scareev responds:
no problem at letting your thoughts coming out! criticism is criticism, and the problem is that i always try to get out of the curve, by doing some stuff that i saw Car Seat Headrest do too, but they somehow can do this kinda of indie more wisely xd, i'm still learning how to increase the quality, but thanks for the feedback!
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