Really reminded me of Blue Sway at the start, which I do really recommend you to listen to since it's in a pretty similar style to what you seem to be doing, but not too much since that is much more disco than electrical.
I do recognise the samples you used quite well, and I think you used them in a very interesting way (Forward march I think one of them is called, I even used it on one of my songs) the forward march feels like a melody for a Vocal Line in an instrument. I don't really love it, but I gave the 4.5 stars regardless, because it is so close to being an actually releasable song out of the go, the whole thing is pretty solid, I would say it's pretty good on my own, the mixing once again could use some work, BUT IT'S A MILLION TIMES BETTER THAN DAY 8, I'll give you that.