he didnt make the beat
~SO DONT GIVE HIM CREDIT FOR IT.~ Lyrics r pretty nice tho :)
Author Comments
Invertin ya face with proverbial bricks
Make him cross infamous river sticks
Call me the plague cause my lyrics makes cysts
And those who diss find themselves in the pits
Caught up in the stich of the shit that I flip
Fiending for power like the bloods and the crips
Only one left on this sinking ship
And down goes captin
What the hell happened
Thought real shit was exposed when rappin
Now it's like "spend your money and keep dancing"
Man I'll dance when im relaxed
One of the endangered brains that still spittin facts
A whole generation that's hidden in the cracks
Grasping our potential
While bleeding through a pencil
Shits simple like a peice through a stencil
With no drips
The games frozen so don't slip
Crack ya hip while you slinging that old shit
And im still throwing fits
-Cause It seems
These days are dreams
Don't know what it means
But I know what I've seen-
Got the Empire panickin
must think that im anikan
bitches stay away from your shit
they think fattening
realeasin all my lipids when I spit it
an unknown sport like that magic shit quiditch
Try to stop me im like BITCH LEME FINISH
And when you see the final product I bet you'll grimace
Cause even those who don't know are still paying penance
And runnings errands
Like they boss was their parents
Fuck a job
Rather hunt another saddam in iran
Like running around with a bomb
Yellin stay calm!
Clocked to explode
Till ignorance erodes
Or till I finally crack and do what I'm told
-Cause it seems
These days are dreams
Don't know what it means
But I know what I've seen-
this is pretty good
i like this a lot man, makes me think alot ^_^ keep it up
Nice Production
I really like the production track on this - it has a bit of that dirty old-school feel, but with more modern sensibilities too. The lyrics got pretty solid flow too, though the voice felt a bit too seperated in the mix from the beats. The only thing I'm so sure about is the intro part - the clicking thing doesn't really seem to lead that well into anythin really. But nice job on this - it's fairlyhard to find decent hip-hop tracks here, so stuff like this is much welcomed. Nice.
holy shit finally
lyrics were actually fucken good for a first on NG from my experience. sick shit man. But it would have been label / radio good if you had someone else do the rapping. hehe, not to be really mean about it, but come on be honest to yourself. You sung it well for the most part but i saw some parts that could have been sung better mostly in tone. And man filtering your vocals would have done wonders because your S's sound lisped a bit.
Overall sick track, straight up.
poopsmcgee823 responds:
someone else is gunna sing but aint no one gunna rap my shit, this was done on a comp so no excuses but I can blame the ss's on that.
Yes.
I don't like hip-hop.
At all.
But I liked this.
A lot.
Get someone else to sing the chorus, just like lucid08 said, but besides that, excelent song and excelent lyrics.
poopsmcgee823 responds:
it's a KRS-1 beat, which is real hip-hop, but thanks for the positive feedback, means a lot since your not a fan of the genre, means i'm doing something right lol rofl tofl dofl
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- 3 min 6 sec
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