This song has some multiple meanings. One version can be very child-like: a toy left alone so long as it wants to play again, even though the owner really doesn't care anymore. Another, S&M-like.... enough said. Or even just on a relationship level.
Whatever the level, it fits many, but I can't say all.
I do admit my voice sounds a little off, but that adds to the trademark of my style. Sadly, every other recording of my voice sounds the same, no real improvement on key. So this is the best I have to offer vocally. If you think you can do better, let me know and I will put your vocals on it. :D
Fail
The crappy poorly mixed techno completely fails to match up with the lyrics. Your trying to mix two moods here, and it doesn't work at all. The whinny soft lyrics sets a completely different tone than the actually music itself. This is a bad mix, and theres a reason why it's never actually done (often I guess).
You need to either completely do the sound and style of the lyrics, or the sound and the style of the song. Better luck next time.
2 Stars
1/5 - 3.86 / 5.00 (- 0.47)
By all means, if you can come up with a better set of lyrics and such, please let me know. Record yourself and let me hear how good it can get.
Couldn't understand the lady but...
That really actually helped it out. Im not sure if It would have gotten better If I could but It might have or might not. Anyways, good job.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
Kilkashi 
