Nice

Very nice work here this was pretty good but was just too short I think you do have something here but needs to be extended into a longer piece here so nice effort here and I like the energy you bring into this one but anyways you have some nice work here make more soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Now I have to say this could be much longer and have more sounds added

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Awesome

Hey look It has A good beat And all just some things don't go together and Just sound bad for example The bell thing...Needs to be fixed or just removed...I think it could really work out and Its really made me think Because a friend of mine asked me to make a Techno like beat and I didn't know where to start...so thanks for that but work on this some and maybe split the melodies up instead of having them all play at the same time have them played at separate times it sounds pretty good to me up till about 0:26

If you have aim or msn let me know Maybe we could work together

Have A Great Day

XenoxX :)

Funky

I like this! It's like a hybrid of techno and hiphop. Awesome! You have to finish this :)

Great!

So far sounds great, smooth and simple, with lots of progressive additions. Tis a bit short though, but I'm sure you'll fix that soon? Keep it going!

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Pretty good

I also think the bassline is kinda loud. I noticed you like making trance and techno tracks and the techno and trance elements are found here too. So yeah, the only suggestion I got is to lower the bass and make it a bit more hip hop sounding, just a tad bit. But this is still good so I'm gonna give it a 5. Keep practicing!