ehh
the kick is too loud.
the tune isn't bad.
the voice is a little too far away. i feel like a frustrated fan at the back of a concert hall. which is bad.
that's all technically speaking.
non-tech, all i can say is that i'm not one for reviewing rap lyrics, half because i can't hear them that well, plus i don't write much rap.
i see that this is a demo so i'm not going to judge you on that, but there is a place for submitting demos on here, i think..
farno1: in my opinion, about 87% of modern rap is total crap, anyway. i don't think this actually deserves a 4 whether i like it or not.
-Vesta J
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