Redone, fixed the volume, bass, hi hat was cut, clap was silenced and reverbed, added sub sounds, made it a lot more clear, the double bass peddle isn't as loud as the original one but i felt it better that way. Hope you enjoy.
This was decent
I like your sounds especially the "DRUMS" the drums was my fave part like how it brings up focus on them i think to improve you should showcase the drums abit more anyways nice job here you have a good sound style
to improve you should showcase the drums abit more
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You had a really nice build up in the first 40 seconds, and then the claps come in and ruin it. i strongly suggest replacing them with snare, or removing them altogether. Also, the beat is way too 4x4 (you know, kick, snare, kick, snare
) try switching it up a bit (like the drum solo's you have)
About the drum solo's,the song seems to dive right in to them, without any warning, and then right back out. You also seem to be focusing WAY too much on the snare drum with the drum rolls that never seem to end. I suggest you clean it up a bit, and shorten it.
From the 2:00 min mark 'till the last 30 sec. i have no complaints.
In the last 30 sec. of the song, the moog arp (i'm assuming you're using FL studio) overpowers the other melodies, and to me, it seems like it doesn't quite fit. Your call on that one.
Anyways, i really enjoy this song, it just needs a little (more) work.
yea your right, i do need to change up the beat some. im just kinda tired on this song, and ill have to get to it some other time. thanks for your review though, i marked it as helpful, because it was! thanks
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I have heard this song before...
i just don't know where
I dont know if you remixed another song but if you did you should really notify the previous author and deal with it unless that arping synth in the background is a sample in which case this song is pretty weak. personally i liked the other version i heard better. It was more interesting. If you did remix this song it should really have the name of the original.
no hard feelings dude doing things that have been done before often gathers critical analysis. I hope to hear more music from you.
Im not too sure what to say to you but this song was made by myself. No sounds or melodies were taken from anyone but myself. I remixed this song from an Original song that " I ", myself made. so ummmm. yea man, thanks for the concern n stuff but that was probably something you shoulld have just PM'd me. thanks though.
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Get better samples for your beats and this will sound 10x better I promise you.
I know, ive got crappies :P thanks, and telling me of somewhere to get better soundfonts would be cool too!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
Spoony18 
