Its not bad, but its not dnb

Its techno. Its not smooth enough with a sub rumble to be dnb, and the rythm is one thats inherently not dnb, and the tempo is wrong.

But as a piece of techno its interesting, tho i gotta tell you i hate THAT kick sound, the clicky low one.

I'm sure you can make a monstrouly long track, make one or angry midgets will come to ruin your life.