Eh. should b fixed
well, it would probably fit the bawlz, but, its too slow in some parts, take half of the first minute out or speed it up, same with end. mabye if u edit before 4-14, its a possible definate yes. Try n fix loop, k?
Author Comments
I made this song for no central purpose but to get my NG Account started. I hope it gets a good entry ranking. I like the sone personally but I don't know how the critics will react.
tdawg41000 responds:
I'll do what I can to fix it up a bit. Thanks dude.
Meh. Loop?
It does not loop well. At least Newgrounds makes it sound bad.
Nice sounds, a bit simple, but oh well, it was fun to listen to.
tdawg41000 responds:
Thank you mister Eggboy. Not a loop anymore. Didn't know what I was doing.
this is very cool
i just thought it should have alittle mor action sound in it
tdawg41000 responds:
Thnks for CC, I rushed a little but won't make excuses for it.
Just... repetitive...
Its ok, but definaitly can be improved. The repition, and the speed are the two things I'm not liking,, other than that this was ok for chilling out.
tdawg41000 responds:
I agree, I might redo it and change it up a bit.
Not bad at all!
Pretty good, actually. Just a couple suggestions:
The vocals were good. I liked how you mixed them and the guitar, just mayble tone the tapping in the background. It was a bit harsh.
Where it picked up the synth at 0:56 or so it really started to sound good. I liked that.
Slightly repetetive on the vocals after a while. Maybe mix it up a bit, add a little variation. Other than that, pretty good!
tdawg41000 responds:
I'll look into it, thanks dawg. 3 7's in a row. . .how unlucky.
Credits & Info
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3.50 / 5.00
- Uploaded
- Mar 21, 2008
- 3:57 PM EDT
- Genre
- Trance
- File Info
- Song
- 1.9 MB
- 2 min 3 sec
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